Kathleen
Great Writer
Live life for the moment, not the moment for life.
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Post by Kathleen on Jun 4, 2005 23:44:46 GMT -5
When she walks near me I feel the truth in her curves. A beautiful person who has everything to learn. No makeup covers her up or compliments her eyes. Yet, she is distinguished when you pass her by. Her mouth creases when she laughs. Laughter makes her arch her back. In every footstep she takes she defines the new coming. A future generation of great "women" in the running. Things she says are hurtful but critically aclaimed. Her brain is taunted but intelligent, all the same. The backside view is a sassy walk. An easy stride to mock. A typical good girl, whose full of love. With bigger places that she dreams of. Brown eyes and dark brown hair. Believes everything in life should be fair. Its all in her walk when she slants from side to side. Everthing about her life is fine. She comes towards me. I form a smiling profile. It's all in that short body that holds it's own space. In a young complectioned face. The next generation that will follow me, to a world where women get to act in their dreams. Her rythem is beautiful, yet incomplete. As she shifts her feet.
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Post by Aaron Graf on Jun 6, 2005 18:12:00 GMT -5
THe poem so far is reallly well written, but I want to see the rest of it before I can formulate an opinion
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Kathleen
Great Writer
Live life for the moment, not the moment for life.
Posts: 42
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Post by Kathleen on Jul 19, 2005 19:22:23 GMT -5
THe poem so far is reallly well written, but I want to see the rest of it before I can formulate an opinion[/quot Ok....It's done!
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