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Post by PaulDoMarChica on Aug 23, 2004 20:05:38 GMT -5
I miss your eyes, your smile, your laugh the way you make my heart beat wild, I miss the way you hold me while we kiss, I wish that there was nothing to miss. I miss you and your family even, for the way they treated me, I miss the way you would grab me for a kiss, look at me that way that I deeply miss. I wish i could be with you now and for every second of the day from now until forever I'll miss you every day in every way.[glow=red,2,300]TEXT[/glow]
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Post by Aaron Graf on Aug 23, 2004 20:18:23 GMT -5
This poem is verry well written, I hope you can see this guy sometime soon it seems as though being without him must be eating at you.
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Post by LostInnocence on Aug 23, 2004 20:25:42 GMT -5
awww i thought it was sweet and romantic...*sniffles* nobody ever writes sweet, romantic poems for me
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Post by BrokenSoul on Aug 23, 2004 20:40:17 GMT -5
awww i thought it was sweet and romantic...*sniffles* nobody ever writes sweet, romantic poems for me i hear ya Lost, my freakin fiance prolly coulndt even write more than a verse from the simpsons: " good food good drink good god lets eat" lol
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Post by xserenityx on Aug 27, 2004 2:28:41 GMT -5
Aww... So sweet =) Nicely put, worded wonderfully. Cannot say much more than that, just great hehe.
-Serenity-
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Post by Aaron Graf on Oct 16, 2004 18:58:45 GMT -5
Hey sorry about having to move your poem again, but a new board is a new board.
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Post by skimpyvamire on Oct 17, 2004 0:06:42 GMT -5
I think everyone else said what needs to be said...it is very nice. I enjoyed reading it.
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Post by strangeclouds on Dec 5, 2004 23:21:42 GMT -5
good job
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