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Post by upperechelon on Feb 15, 2005 21:42:09 GMT -5
Through the speckled cloak of just the sea- where boundaries are found, our paths connect infinitely- emitting not a sound. Clashing versus we would think to say- While we carry on, Alarm clocks ring to bring the day- it's just another dawn. Delete the ocean's emotionless motion- from the shallows of your drive, Decompose the constructive notion- that we're both alive. Refusal thrives in both our lives- much like the cloudy skies, I lack the inhibition, you believe my lies.
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Post by Nobody on Feb 16, 2005 11:18:32 GMT -5
Just wanted to say I loved this poem... Great writing....
~A Nobody
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Post by upperechelon on Feb 16, 2005 18:16:09 GMT -5
thanks
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Post by strangeclouds on Feb 17, 2005 14:10:11 GMT -5
*smiles*
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