oOFoxxyDeannaOo
Great Writer
I wish I was a fish so that I could drown.
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Post by oOFoxxyDeannaOo on Oct 26, 2004 3:11:03 GMT -5
If you love me.....
set me free.
Would'nt you love to see how beautiful my wings can be?
I'm no longer caged but earthbound by your insecurities.
You make it so hard to fly,
when all you do
is clip my wings.
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Post by strangeclouds on Oct 27, 2004 0:06:22 GMT -5
aww. i liked that one.
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oOFoxxyDeannaOo
Great Writer
I wish I was a fish so that I could drown.
Posts: 46
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Post by oOFoxxyDeannaOo on Nov 9, 2004 10:59:54 GMT -5
;D
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Post by Aaron Graf on Nov 9, 2004 19:03:57 GMT -5
I know how you feel when you get into a relationship that turns out for the worst. Still a very good poem you wrote.....good job.
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oOFoxxyDeannaOo
Great Writer
I wish I was a fish so that I could drown.
Posts: 46
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Post by oOFoxxyDeannaOo on Nov 10, 2004 4:16:40 GMT -5
it just kinda sucks when you can see that the realationship isnt working but the other person refuses to give up, its faltering and all but it makes things so much harder to resolve.
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Post by princesskitana on Nov 29, 2004 15:59:06 GMT -5
:'(Aww...what a poem eventhough it was short..it held a bigger meaning within. Similarly, a meaning that i'm curious about...since your other write....hmm...anyway...I must be to nosie....I dunno ;D
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oOFoxxyDeannaOo
Great Writer
I wish I was a fish so that I could drown.
Posts: 46
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Post by oOFoxxyDeannaOo on Dec 3, 2004 13:31:45 GMT -5
i dont think a poem has to be long to have a big meaning to it. most of my poems are like that.... short and to the point. no bullshit, no pussy footing around the true meaning.  |
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