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Post by subcityshallows on Feb 21, 2005 3:31:31 GMT -5
It falls on me... I divorce time and space Time Square falls around us Like sunlight peaking Between the clouds as the Ashes kiss our faces, ...All is solace... But the whispers of the earth In the air And the songs of your gaze Meeting mine And I am suddenly mundane In that all I understand is, This is yours This is mine This is ours Until it becomes to beautiful And *click*, the white borders close around us While the very hand of creation Shakes it black, then grey Then us.
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Post by strangeclouds on Feb 27, 2005 0:22:57 GMT -5
*smiles* that was beautiful. i dont know what to say.
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Post by cumslut on Mar 1, 2005 23:13:42 GMT -5
Wow. It is well written. I liked it. Keep up the good work.
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