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Post by Aaron Graf on Feb 9, 2005 9:31:07 GMT -5
The One Thing I Hid From You
Two days left until I must part from you, My sweetest friend, I must say goodbye, The one who I never hide anything from. There is one thing I hide from you, The way that I’ve felt for the longest of time. Eating away at me like a rotting old ship, A secret I hide, something you don’t know, Because I want you to be happy with your husband-to-be, But I hide from you the longing for your kiss, The urges for your touch, Or to rest in my arms. Something to soothe me when I’m on the verge of suicide, I walk this road alone, you won’t be there, Yet I still can’t tell you, no matter how hard I try. That for almost a year I wish I was there first, Before he came around, I wish it was me who gave you the ring, Who had you with him through thick and thin, This feeling I have cuts deep inside, So it has been for the longest of times. I bid you adieu while I silently part, Leaving you behind, but not how I feel. There’s something I hide that I wish I could let out, I love you Megan.
~ Aaron Graf
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Post by BrokenSoul on Feb 9, 2005 9:51:00 GMT -5
aw baby i hope that she sees this and realizes what she is about to loose, you are an amazing, wonderful, caring person. i know that you will find love and happiness someday
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Post by Cumslut on Feb 9, 2005 10:10:22 GMT -5
You should tell her how you feel. She should read this. She needs to understand how you feel. Good poem. Well written.
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Heavy Hearted
Excellent Writer
My soul is dead....but I wish it me instead...
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Post by Heavy Hearted on Feb 9, 2005 11:47:05 GMT -5
You should tell her before its to late....I know I did....and it was to late for me, but it isn't for you.... She ain't married yet....... Just follow your heart, it'll lead the proper path for you...cause you never know til you try... >>Heavy Hearted<<
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Heavy Hearted
Excellent Writer
My soul is dead....but I wish it me instead...
Posts: 66
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Post by Heavy Hearted on Feb 9, 2005 19:56:47 GMT -5
HI, I reread it and I still say you should tell.... Its was well writen....my fav part was... But I hide from you the longing for your kiss, The urges for your touch, Or to rest in my arms. Something to soothe me when I’m on the verge of suicide, I walk this road alone, you won’t be there, Yet I still can’t tell you, no matter how hard I try. This part I understood only to well >>Heavy Hearted<<
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Post by EternalDarkness on Feb 9, 2005 23:23:06 GMT -5
hey im only a kid but you gotta tell her how you feel... you never know she might love you2
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Post by LostInnocence on Feb 11, 2005 12:47:31 GMT -5
nice poem....
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Post by strangeclouds on Feb 13, 2005 22:43:37 GMT -5
aw that made me sad
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