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Post by ForgetMEnot on Oct 18, 2004 10:43:31 GMT -5
I just lie here and wonder constantly if I'm insane are am i to blame for my fucked up thoughts... i assume i am and always will be alone truly be alone do i actually know? yes i do... like when I'm around you and everyone else I'm surrounded by love and life but I'm just lost if it be my mind or soul, heart i truly have parted my body... in all reality death crept upon me and claimed me another cremated soul another dead bee crushed agaisnt dead skin
by: Ash DM 03'
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Post by oleanderdragon on Oct 19, 2004 2:24:29 GMT -5
Only saw this.. in your fourth line it should be or not are.. This was a wonderful poem otherwise darlin. Awesome writing
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Post by ForgetMEnot on Oct 19, 2004 13:06:03 GMT -5
why thank you. I never noticed that till now. I shall leave it for it is how I wrote it so long ago..
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Post by strangeclouds on Oct 29, 2004 0:39:10 GMT -5
you are one of my favorite poets.
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