I hate you

[BrokenSoul]

{Dedicated and written about how my mother makes me feel}

I Hate You:

How do you do it?
How is it you can
Make me
Feel so low and worthless?
Damnit!
I hate you and
What you make me do.
Because of you
I am a freak.
A failure,
A screwed-up depressed teen.
I cut myself to feel relieve the pain.
I slice and dice,
Shed crimson tears
To escape the pain,
The pain I feel from you
And what you make
Me do.
I hate you!


/me Sarah A Wilson

[Aaron Graf]

Had a good beat to it and I truly like that write because there's too many people here I feel that way about.

[onyxfiretear]

the depth of this poem is, hell I ahve no words. you tugged at my heart with your words. I really hope things are better for you

[blacktears]

i dont know, it didnt have meaning. there was no eternal sympathetic crusial depth to it. sorry.

[oleanderdragon]

I would definitely say you got it out to where we all feel you Just keeping looking at the silver lining in the clouds.. like one day you will be on your own and won't have to put up with it on a daily basis.. Just a thought Awesome writing

[strangeclouds]

that makes me wanna kick some ass