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Post by youreTOfake on Aug 21, 2004 13:48:47 GMT -5
So this is where we end up Fighting to take our dreams back Crying because we can't take the nightmares Screaming because it hurts so bad Still we try, Constantly with false hopes Maybe, Just Maybe, we'll reach the top Guess we all tried to hard We over did it and now we're stuck Stuck in a thought that gives a different meaning to life Stuck with a sword and hate Every life we see, we take Until we come to face ourselves.. A new dillema Shall we kill ourselves? There's no sense in living to die We hold up the swords and ready for attack Just when we bare our necks and turn our backs We turn to each other Drawing our swords up towards each other Sending shock through our bodies So this is where we end up.. Brother against brother... IN OUR DREAMS
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Post by Aaron Graf on Aug 21, 2004 13:56:01 GMT -5
Wow, very mesmerizing!
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Post by xserenityx on Aug 21, 2004 22:43:12 GMT -5
This was nicely done. I really enjoyed it, very deep and meaningful. Makes you think, really =) Definitely write more.
-serenity-
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