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Post by onyxfiretear on Nov 11, 2004 6:16:01 GMT -5
Heads with no bodies Clumps of hair that used to belong on someones scalps Fingernails tore out one by one Hands soaking in pure salt
Holes in chest cavities Where the heart used to reside Pools of warm crimson flow Shallow breaths as life dissipates
Whimpers and cries Begs and pleads Please don't let this horror be Forgive me and let me live
Not a chance in hell
Lighting a cigarette with your soul now on my hands Taking sheer joy in your agony Reeling on the ground like a fish gasping for air Isn't a bitch when there is no one there?
No one to hear your please Where are they when you need them the most Same place they were when I died long ago Welcome to my world how does it feel rag doll?
Tortured and tormented creatures we are You are just now getting a taste Of what it is like to be force fed the fire Does it taste good
Your end now drawing near Or is it the beginning of a new dark life? I will take your soul and make it mine Tormented and cursed life will you lead
When you look at others All you want is to make them bleed Telling them to make sure all pay heed Welcome to my night, my torture, my curse
This is our Vampyric Night Now completely immerse
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Post by strangeclouds on Nov 12, 2004 0:28:46 GMT -5
wooooooooooooooooow. that was awesome.
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Post by Aaron Graf on Nov 14, 2004 4:59:49 GMT -5
well written, dark, symbolic, really loved it.
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