The counselor in my mirror

[Kathleen]

Hello.
Here you are again.
Why do you lie?
You know behind those bright blue eyes, your scared.
Your hair is dyed, I can tell,
because it looks too pretty.
Your neck is a rope.
Why are you hopping to choke.
I see you sing.
Your voice I don't hear.
But i see it.
Your ears are odd,
attached to your head like that.
I see you mouth those warning lyrics
in you slender lips.
I don't know what they mean.
Hello, again.
Are you dirty?
Is that why your undressing,
to get in the shower?
Your hair looks different,
did you dye it again?
Your wearing makeup,
I can tell.
I like it.
It isn't over done.
I like that your not covering up.
Just promoting the focus on your eyes,
Damn, there really blue.
They shine inside you.
It's nice.
Hi, I'm getting tired of you.
Now you've decided to shower again.
Your of no filth like your minds tells you.
It tells to cleanse again.
Remind it that you've done nothing wrong, your still a virgin.
Did someone for get this?
You body is clean.
Maybe that's your problem.
You regret saying no.
He wishes you hadn't.
You know whom I speak of.
That guy who touched you.
But...don't worry, I won't tell.
Your friends,
your family shall never know.
Hey, it's been a while.
You have a bright smile,
to bad you never use it.
I see you have chosen a hair color.
It's nature looking,
we both know you'll get sick of it after a while.
Has that scum called.
The one who called you mean names.
Is your body still covered.
You haven't uncrossed your legs,
good.
Your young.
More importantly you've never been in love.
Goodbye, I'll see you again.
I like your hair up.
It suits the mood you seem to be in.
You look like shit,
But not physically.
Physically- Your quite pretty.
But worn out.
You have to do everything alone.
I know it's tuff.
To have no one to hold unto, or tell you they love you.
Sorry I can't help.
But I'm not doing to well myself.
Goodbye, see you next time you need advice.

[Aaron Graf]

I really liked how you wrote this poem, going into many signs that girls who have been raped let off [constantly thinking they're dirty, feeling alone, covering up, etc]. But this could not have been better than what it is now. I like reading your poems because they have their own beat, their own message, and their own way of going about things. And by the way I am trying to get some new types of poetry, just kinda hard right now, seeing things from a right wing perspective. I haven't seen it from that view since I was 12 years old, even then I was still the only pro-choice, pro-gay rights republican I knew [considering I was a closeted bisexual since I was 10]. But regardless I love what you have written here

[Kathleen]

Thank you. And again the right side of things was not an insult~ I hope I didn't make you angry, because I think your a really great writer...well thank you again.

admin said:

I really liked how you wrote this poem, going into many signs that girls who have been raped let off [constantly thinking they're dirty, feeling alone, covering up, etc]. But this could not have been better than what it is now. I like reading your poems because they have their own beat, their own message, and their own way of going about things. And by the way I am trying to get some new types of poetry, just kinda hard right now, seeing things from a right wing perspective. I haven't seen it from that view since I was 12 years old, even then I was still the only pro-choice, pro-gay rights republican I knew [considering I was a closeted bisexual since I was 10]. But regardless I love what you have written here

[Aaron Graf]

No I didn't take that as an insult at all, I just happen to be clueless as to what to write from the position of a conservative, that's what I was saying. Although I ironically have accepted your challenge.

[Kathleen]

Great and good. I'm glad your up for the challenge. Good luck again.

admin said:

No I didn't take that as an insult at all, I just happen to be clueless as to what to write from the position of a conservative, that's what I was saying. Although I ironically have accepted your challenge.