Daggers

[LostInnocence]

Daggers
His words are daggers
They tear, they cut, they run deep
Into my soul and my heart,
My heart that is wounded because of his deadening blows.
He never ceases to kill my soul with his strong daggers.
He continues to thrust them from deep inside himself,
Until they reach me and he twists and turns the handle of his words,
As they stir deep into my heart until injured by his strikes.
I lay there writhing in my feelings of hurt and betrayal,
The betrayal brought upon his words that strike me so harshly.
When he runs out of daggers, he retreats into the darkness.
The daggers leave my body but they never leave my mind.
The scars remain hidden in my soul and my heart.
Until those daggers come back into my mind
And tears flow from my eyes,
Because of the profound pain they brought upon me.
The pain that never goes away because his words ran so deeply.

[Aaron Graf]

OMG that was sad. WOrds are the worst though, they always stay with you.

[BrokenSoul]

thatsa gooda lyhna haha ;D wow

[xserenityx]

Wow.... This was so touching and so incredibly drawn out. Very detailed and emotional

I look forward to reading more from you so keep them coming - I just hope these writes aren't from actual experiences although why else would you write such a sad event out?

-Serenity-

[LostInnocence]

Unfortunately this poem was written after a jerk said something to me that i can't repeat because it has naughty words

[onyxfiretear]

This is a really great poem, full of sadness angst and raw emotion, but here and there it is wordy. Do not get me wrong, writting what you feel is the best possible thing to do, but i think the flow suffers from all the words. keep your head high.