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Post by Nacht der Tiger on Nov 11, 2004 1:13:42 GMT -5
Praying for a rainy day So the tears she cries Will fade away
She's beautiful as she is She's not a failure like she says She's beautiful
Carrying on living each day She's stronger than you may say She's beautiful
Her soul is heavy and broken She suffers so much yet She's beautiful
She's a young girl A young adult She's human
She's beautiful in every way No matter what people say She's beautiful beyond words
She only deserves love It's the beautiful souls That seem to suffer the most
No matter what happens to her She still remains beautiful She's beautiful in every way
She suffers a lot But she still remains Beautiful
~~ Do not complain about overuse of the word beautiful that was the point. TO emphasize how beautiful this person really is... She's been having a hard time and I was trying to emphasize this.
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Post by Aaron Graf on Nov 11, 2004 20:59:49 GMT -5
I actually think she is beautiful helped reinforce your point in the poem.....good job.
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Post by toolshed0673 on Mar 28, 2005 15:40:39 GMT -5
what else can i say but...um...beautiful
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Post by celia on Apr 17, 2005 23:34:06 GMT -5
I actually think she is beautiful helped reinforce your point in the poem.....good job. [glow=red,2,300]TEXT[/glow] I think that your poem was... well quite beautiful.... ;D
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Heavy Hearted
Excellent Writer
My soul is dead....but I wish it me instead...
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Post by Heavy Hearted on Apr 29, 2005 2:06:17 GMT -5
Great poem....I love the fact you emphasized on the word beautiful....for you hit it right, everyone is beautiful, no matter what. Your poem was as the others have said....BEAUTIFUL!
>>ANGIE<<
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