Can You See Me Bleed:

[subcityshallows]

Quit crying and come inside
I wont shut you out and let you die
I could use a little comfort too
Just so long as I can be with you
Wont you come and love for me
So I can fell you breathe
My life is just a withered leaf
So crumble it and let me bleed
Quit crying and come inside
Its not for you, I need to feel alive
Wont you come and love for me
So I can finally be
CAN YOU SEE ME BLEED
CAN YOU SEE ME BLEED
Wont you come and love for me
I’m begging you not to flee
CAN YOU SEE ME BLEED
CAN YOU SEE ME BLEED
Quit crying and come inside
Dont leave me out and let me die.

[strangeclouds]

[Misery666]

This is one of the best poems I've ever read! many kudos...

subcityshallows said:

Quit crying and come inside
I wont shut you out and let you die
I could use a little comfort too
Just so long as I can be with you
Wont you come and love for me
So I can fell you breathe
My life is just a withered leaf
So crumble it and let me bleed
Quit crying and come inside
Its not for you, I need to feel alive
Wont you come and love for me
So I can finally be
CAN YOU SEE ME BLEED
CAN YOU SEE ME BLEED
Wont you come and love for me
I’m begging you not to flee
CAN YOU SEE ME BLEED
CAN YOU SEE ME BLEED
Quit crying and come inside
Dont leave me out and let me die.

[cumslut]

Aaron,

I think that this poem is really good. I like the imagery. I give it two thumbs up. You know how to write depression poems.

Crystal