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Post by Trilliana on Nov 19, 2004 23:27:37 GMT -5
Last chances at love Crumbling this girl down Can't stand the pain She lets herself Be in. So, saying goodnight To her family She talks to her friends And someone she loves All night Little did they know That behind her "cheerful" tones She was drying the tears Falling down her face. As she gave in She picked up her beloved switchblade Tears blinded her eyes As she drug the edge Down her wrists The pain wasn't there She felt none of it As she dug deeper Cutting into the vein Suddenly, she sees Everything she has just done Told her friends She'd be right back And into the bathroom She had gone. She never did Ever come back Though her friends talk to Who they think is her She lost herself A long time ago When her innocence Was taken from her Tonight, the last person She will ever speak to Is the man she loves. Then the end of A fallen angel A desireless faerie Has come
*~Author's Note: I'm alright, I swear. I have no new wounds. I wrote this at work and I"m wondering what you all think...~*
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Post by strangeclouds on Nov 20, 2004 0:57:23 GMT -5
wooooow. that was awesome.
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Post by Aaron Graf on Nov 20, 2004 6:14:21 GMT -5
Kept me on the edge of my seat....very well done Em.
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Post by BrokenSoul on Nov 20, 2004 23:39:42 GMT -5
that was outstanding! i really liked that, someting i want to do right now.....
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Post by Trilliana on Nov 20, 2004 23:47:13 GMT -5
*hugs* don't feel that way... I wrote just so I could STOP feeling that way...
if ever you need someone to talk to... I volunteer... darkvampgodess on AIM desireless_fae2004 on YIM...
Smile soon hun...
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Post by onyxfiretear on Nov 27, 2004 13:40:26 GMT -5
sad but beautiful
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Post by ForgetMEnot on Dec 8, 2004 9:57:18 GMT -5
Loved it! this is poetry from the heart..deep.
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Post by ShatteredLife on Jan 14, 2005 22:46:34 GMT -5
wow that was awesome! it's how i feel practically every second of every day!!!
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