Shadow
Amatuer
I'm a shadow in life, A failure of humanity's strife
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Post by Shadow on Dec 22, 2004 10:42:29 GMT -5
Stick the needle in your flesh Shove it roughly through the side Blood and skin and body dies As breath and black collide
Candlesticks in melted flame With shadows screaming high Cold skin shaking in the dark For icy breath goodbye
Claw markings trail the peeling walls the floor so ripped and torn Heated body forced black eyes As shell of life is born
Pale flesh in candle glow The color seeping out Grasp your pain and force it down Supress all fear and doubt
You lie amongst the screaming tomb Wax skeletons sobbing death Exhale the smoke from which they made Reach in and steal your breath
The candles drown in glistening melt Smoke haze their final cry Sit back and watch your body bleed Eyes glaze as candles die
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Post by strangeclouds on Dec 23, 2004 15:17:47 GMT -5
that was beautiful
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Shadow
Amatuer
I'm a shadow in life, A failure of humanity's strife
Posts: 21
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Post by Shadow on Dec 24, 2004 0:31:45 GMT -5
Thank you. That means alot comeing from you. I have read your stuff I like it alot.
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Post by strangeclouds on Dec 26, 2004 15:12:23 GMT -5
that makes me feel special, i actually dont get alot of comments.
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