The Day That I Die

[EternalDarkness]

ok i know this sux but im only 11 so give me a break

walking all alone on this moonlit trail,
watching the trees sway back and forth,
watching the stars shoot across the sky,
this is the happiest day of my life,
because this is the day that i die.

[Aaron Graf]

Nothing wrong with it really, only could give you recommendation to give a little more length but I do like that.

[cumslut]

This is good. YOu could use a little more length. Good idea though. keep up the good work.

[strangeclouds]

I agree, i liked it.