Suicide Friend 2-23-98’

[ForgetMEnot]

What is your problem?
My suicide friend
Why don’t you solve them?
Then the pain can end

You wanted to be friends
So did I
You made me wonder
When you said, “I need to die.”<br>
We all have problems
Not just you
So please think twice
Cause everyone is screwed

Tell me your pain
Talk to me
We’re all insane
Can’t you see?

If I can’t help you
Then who can?
I will always be your friend
Not your man

But I wasn’t much help
You grabbed a knife
I could not stop you
You took your only life

I held you in my arms
I cried my last tear
You and I were not warm
For you were not here

Now I’m all alone
Now I have your pain
My heart has turn to stone
I am now permanently insane

by: Ash DM

[xserenityx]

This piece is really heart-wrenching, tear-jerking... I can't really comment much on anything other than the main idea. Writing wise, the way some of it rhymed and some didn't somewhat threw me off. You were gramatically correct, was only the rhyming =) Great piece you have here, though. I look forward to reading more from yourself.

-Serenity-

[Aaron Graf]

Jeeze dude could ya get any more true bout what happens when a friend commits suicide. I was that friend but I never had the abliity to look at it thru the eyes of those who wanted me alive when I weaas suicidal. Very good write though.

[ForgetMEnot]

thank you all! so nice. I shall reply to some of your poems as well. I've read a few here and all so exquisite. better than mine. see ya around,
::ash::

[BrokenSoul]

good poem, sad i know friends like that

[ForgetMEnot]

why thank you all again.

[strangeclouds]

good job hun.