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Aug 22, 2004 22:50:20 GMT -5
Post by BrokenSoul on Aug 22, 2004 22:50:20 GMT -5
Silence builds an awful wreckage of a girl It feeds on loneliness and creates a void Gray shadows haunt and torment and torture A teenager is stricken and destroyed
There is no sound of laughter or happiness here The little one has thrown in the towel today Somber, melancholy moods decay the soul It is futile to hope and dream and pray
Emptiness builds a home in this woman In this girl, this child where hollows have bred A deepening sea of nowhereness consumes And eats away at every connecting thread
Confusion feeds like a savage inside her, Leaving nothing considered worthy remains Destined to walk through life less ordinary Alone, exiled, different and disdained.
/me Sarah A Wilson
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Aug 23, 2004 0:20:01 GMT -5
Post by LostInnocence on Aug 23, 2004 0:20:01 GMT -5
the poem was good but it was sad Sarah...
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Aug 27, 2004 2:25:37 GMT -5
Post by xserenityx on Aug 27, 2004 2:25:37 GMT -5
Very very sad... Great write, but yea depressing. I like your style of writing, very enticing, you keep me reading through without boring me. You seem to trap your readers, lose them in your poetic wording and meaningful writes. Again, keep it up =)
-Serenity-
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Oct 19, 2004 0:05:38 GMT -5
Post by strangeclouds on Oct 19, 2004 0:05:38 GMT -5
that was so beautiful, it made my insides ache.
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Oct 19, 2004 13:25:10 GMT -5
Post by poetryladycat on Oct 19, 2004 13:25:10 GMT -5
;)A goos write and a sad write.
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Oct 19, 2004 13:33:06 GMT -5
Post by ForgetMEnot on Oct 19, 2004 13:33:06 GMT -5
this is why I LOVE sad and depressing poetry. ::ash::
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