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Burns:
Oct 25, 2004 1:51:23 GMT -5
Post by strangeclouds on Oct 25, 2004 1:51:23 GMT -5
Why do you burn yourself?" She asked. He shrugged. "You like the pain?" He shrugged again, obviously embarassed. "What? You can tune it out?" She asked. "Yeah." He said. She paused- smiling. "Well, don't do it anymore...you might lose feeling." She then continued, undisturbed.
I wondered....if he had ever had feeling, at all...
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Burns:
Oct 25, 2004 15:31:43 GMT -5
Post by BrokenSoul on Oct 25, 2004 15:31:43 GMT -5
interesting....makes ya think...good
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Burns:
Oct 25, 2004 15:42:02 GMT -5
Post by ForgetMEnot on Oct 25, 2004 15:42:02 GMT -5
hmm confusing but nice. enjoyed it dearly.
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Burns:
Oct 26, 2004 23:38:43 GMT -5
Post by strangeclouds on Oct 26, 2004 23:38:43 GMT -5
? hows it confusing?
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Burns:
Oct 27, 2004 19:19:00 GMT -5
Post by Aaron Graf on Oct 27, 2004 19:19:00 GMT -5
It's very interesting......because she knows this guy is not going to quit so in a sense it's true, you've lost all feeling, have become completely hardened by it. It's your heart telling you that you want help though and showing it to the rest of the world. Still a very great poem.
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Burns:
Nov 1, 2004 0:27:04 GMT -5
Post by strangeclouds on Nov 1, 2004 0:27:04 GMT -5
im still confused
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oOFoxxyDeannaOo
Great Writer
I wish I was a fish so that I could drown.
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Burns:
Jan 25, 2005 6:29:33 GMT -5
Post by oOFoxxyDeannaOo on Jan 25, 2005 6:29:33 GMT -5
It's very interesting......because she knows this guy is not going to quit so in a sense it's true, you've lost all feeling, have become completely hardened by it. It's your heart telling you that you want help though and showing it to the rest of the world. Still a very great poem. I cant fuckin stand it when people claim someone is "crying out for help" ... ya know if i want fuckin help i ask for it.... if i want to burn myself or fuckin slit my arms because i liek it or i can tune out the fuckin pain... its not because i want some fuckin retard that thinks they know me to tell me that i need some fuckin help!!
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