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Dec 10, 2004 20:47:35 GMT -5
Post by LostInnocence on Dec 10, 2004 20:47:35 GMT -5
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I hate this life. I've had enough. Some pills, a knife, a hangman's noose. What else have I got to lose? Lost my friends, lost my mind. Just want to leave this cruel world behind. A blue pill in hand everyday. If I only had my way. No worries, no cares, no sadness or despair. No longer a sister, no longer a daughter. Wonder when death will come upon my "brother." Thought college was the answer, My one and only escape. But I find myself drowning, remaining unsaved. Friends can only watch as the pain overflows. Staring and seeing a broken-down soul. I have an emptiness, a void never to be filled. Caused by my parents neglectful abuse. Looking in the mirror, I see dull eyes. No more sparkle or dimpled smiles. Just the story of a lonely child.
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oOFoxxyDeannaOo
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I wish I was a fish so that I could drown.
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Dec 10, 2004 20:53:50 GMT -5
Post by oOFoxxyDeannaOo on Dec 10, 2004 20:53:50 GMT -5
It sucks to say that i know how you feel.. well ... used to know i guess.
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Dec 11, 2004 0:29:41 GMT -5
Post by strangeclouds on Dec 11, 2004 0:29:41 GMT -5
aw, i liked that. and i love your userpicture
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Dec 12, 2004 17:42:03 GMT -5
Post by LostInnocence on Dec 12, 2004 17:42:03 GMT -5
It sucks to say that i know how you feel.. well ... used to know i guess. I'm glad u said "used to know" nobody should feel the way i do...nobody.
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Dec 12, 2004 19:37:14 GMT -5
Post by BrokenSoul on Dec 12, 2004 19:37:14 GMT -5
i know where you live, im gonna hunt you down and kill you!! lol j/k well technically not, i do know where you live lol ya know who this is anyways dont worry, Orlando Bloom will be making you feel better for x-mas lol
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Dec 13, 2004 18:17:55 GMT -5
Post by Aaron Graf on Dec 13, 2004 18:17:55 GMT -5
Sad to say have only seen my friends suffer like that, I was only the one who was left alone to cut himself. thing is I really liked that poem. Very sad and definitely could see personal feeling come out of it. Good job.
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Dec 13, 2004 19:44:39 GMT -5
Post by LostInnocence on Dec 13, 2004 19:44:39 GMT -5
Just a question out of curiosity...i just wanted to know how people interpreted this poem...like what do u think I was writing about? what is the blue pill? why am i wishing death upon my brother?
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