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Post by strangeclouds on Dec 10, 2004 0:33:12 GMT -5
I want to go insane- To let my eyes close as those colored lights Stream across my face... But instead, I enclose myself In tinted glass- Brightly colored to make me think- That I- am alive. And I ask, "How can the moon save you, if it is only made- of a Reflection?" I stop, to watch her breathe...
"Do this- In rememberance of me." ....And she smiles.
And she smiles.
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Post by Aaron Graf on Dec 10, 2004 17:44:47 GMT -5
Kinda dark and scary, great use of metaphor.....liked your poem.
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oOFoxxyDeannaOo
Great Writer
I wish I was a fish so that I could drown.
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Post by oOFoxxyDeannaOo on Dec 10, 2004 20:48:39 GMT -5
Dude i'm IN LOVE WITH YOU!! be mine forever!
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Post by strangeclouds on Dec 11, 2004 0:12:26 GMT -5
oh okaaaay...lol
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