Shadow
Amatuer
I'm a shadow in life, A failure of humanity's strife
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Post by Shadow on Jan 6, 2005 9:21:18 GMT -5
Ignored in the light of day. Not noticed in the night. I do not cast a shadow. I am a shadow.
I don?t live I just exist. There?s no room in this world of light for someone so dark I lurk in the shadows, trying to erase my horrible past. I exist, only to die as the rest of us do. What is the point of it all? I feel sorry for those who try to make their life decent, because all their hard work they put into it, all of the effort, is washed away and forgotten in a mere second, as their life ends and they plummet into a darkness they can never escape.
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Post by onyxfiretear on Jan 6, 2005 13:53:06 GMT -5
i can totlaly relate to this peice. i think it is well done and extremely hard core way to look at life. i look in my childrens eyes and see through them, that all that is worked hard for will live on.
thaks for such a kick ass poem
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Post by strangeclouds on Jan 7, 2005 2:17:11 GMT -5
i really like that.
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