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Post by Aaron Graf on Aug 24, 2004 21:59:45 GMT -5
I’ll Get the Last Laugh
I’ll show you one of these days, For making fun of me, You called me weird you called me gay, I’ll have the last laugh Raferti. High school’s over now and yet I am still plotting, Ways to make you leave this mortal coil, I’ll leave you dead and rotting, Somewhere in fertile soil. Into a bag, if I could only drag, Your fatass to my car. I exploded like a frag, drenched in blood like a rag, You helped me go this far! You even ripped up my books, My one and only friend, I’ll give you gleeful looks, When your life comes to an end. Your friends were there to help you, So I had to take your shit, If only you knew what you got into, Because now you’ve dug yourself a pit. With a knife or a sword, A shotgun or a nine, Brutal like the Great Khan’s horde, And crazed like Columbine. You mocked every word I said The day you apologize for pushing me around, Is the day a bullet tears through your head, And you fall onto the ground. You look at me bloody and about to die, You say you’re suffering and ask why I laugh at you, I spit in your face as you start to cry, And say “now you know what I went through.”<br>
~Aaron Graf
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blacktears
Amatuer
when i right nobody remembers, when im wrong no body forgets
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Post by blacktears on Oct 17, 2004 10:15:49 GMT -5
oh, my, god, aaron, im lost for fucking words that was... amazing wow shit like. you drew me into that and i was just stuned. that was, beautiful. so deep, and meaninful truthfull fearless powerful, yet still with fear. it was wow, i cant believe such beautiful words exist. my world came to a pause and a i had to wonder, who u are. really. i searched, and it was beautiful.
honestly, amazing.
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Post by oleanderdragon on Oct 17, 2004 17:47:00 GMT -5
I have a poem like this.. Somewhere.. based off of a quote This is really good darlin
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Post by Aaron Graf on Oct 18, 2004 6:21:04 GMT -5
Thanks for reading ya'll
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Post by Faerie on Oct 21, 2004 12:16:41 GMT -5
Ha, this is fucking amazing! I love revenge poems, I love revenge!! AHHHH!!! This was great. And the rhyming was awesome, It didn't seem forced which made it even better!
Gg
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Post by cumslut on Feb 8, 2005 17:52:53 GMT -5
Revenge poems are fucking awesome. I love this one Aaron. I am lost for words. I froze in time. I tried to picture you doing that to that fucking fatass. He deserves to die. He should burn in hell. Well I can't wait for the next one. This poem is so fucking awesome.
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