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Post by Wallflower on Mar 6, 2005 4:39:55 GMT -5
The music in the graveyard, comes from the purple moon; You can softly hear it thunder, softly hear it swoon. In the moonlight, covered with dew, the gras would grow just the same; Samer than the others, had there been no rain. The graveyard and the honest death have been but innocently stained; The innocence, and freshness of this place have been restrained. When you speak, vainity is all I hear; The distain drips from your lips, as I draw near. In your mind, the truth must be spoken in a lie; One covered with the other, makes weary to my eye. There will be a lie of a tie, in our competition game; Just because, NEITHER of us, wants to be the one to blame.
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Post by toolshed0673 on Mar 29, 2005 21:58:55 GMT -5
rhyming is good in a poem but don't try so hard to rhyme. i did like the idea though. hope u don't take criticism personally. i'm not trying to be mean
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