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Post by strangeclouds on Oct 19, 2004 1:06:42 GMT -5
If I had one choice I would run with you- forever. I would live my days by the light of your hair- And the song that you sing Without even speaking. If I had my way, The only tears you'd ever cry Would be because you were laughing- Too- hard. And if it were my choice- There would be nothing between us... But nothing.
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Post by poetryladycat on Oct 19, 2004 22:23:44 GMT -5
;)A great write, but write you because you wrote youd lol.
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Post by princesskitana on Oct 22, 2004 22:59:50 GMT -5
I like your interesting style with the dashes. It's very unique..unless i haven't had really much exposure to poetry. But it's new to me. Very powerful in some ways.
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Post by strangeclouds on Oct 27, 2004 0:15:02 GMT -5
thank you, they are inspired by emily dickinson.
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