oOFoxxyDeannaOo
Great Writer
I wish I was a fish so that I could drown.
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Post by oOFoxxyDeannaOo on Nov 9, 2004 10:48:41 GMT -5
He said I didn't need wings to be his angel, so I let him rip them off in vain.
I'll never fly from you, to make you feel like your in heaven. I thought you knew my heart belonged to you when you spoke those lies to make me love you.
I'd let my excuses drip out of my mouth like razorblades on my tounge just to be with you.
He said I'd make him feel special everytime I'd hurt others to see him smile. All my pointless efforts to love someone who will never love me back.
This time I have no wings to carry me through the darkness. But I'd do it over and over again just to hear that you need me.
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Post by strangeclouds on Nov 10, 2004 13:49:56 GMT -5
aw, that made me sad cause its so true.
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Post by Aaron Graf on Nov 10, 2004 22:10:27 GMT -5
I know how you feel on loving somebody who doesn't love you back.............on far more occassions.........*kisses her cheeks* very nice write.
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oOFoxxyDeannaOo
Great Writer
I wish I was a fish so that I could drown.
Posts: 46
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Post by oOFoxxyDeannaOo on Nov 11, 2004 7:26:54 GMT -5
thank you so much!!!
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Post by princesskitana on Nov 29, 2004 17:01:51 GMT -5
:'(That is so sweet. Your tone has really changed since last time. That's was lovely. When we read many of a person's poem we start to notice their style. I think I have noticed yours...you seem to like short and direct? To flood people's mind wif meanings?
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oOFoxxyDeannaOo
Great Writer
I wish I was a fish so that I could drown.
Posts: 46
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Post by oOFoxxyDeannaOo on Nov 30, 2004 9:46:32 GMT -5
I just write down what i feel....
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