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Post by Aaron Graf on Oct 9, 2004 20:10:35 GMT -5
This is a poem I wrote about a friend of mine, her name remains annoymous but she knows who she is.
Still Love You
If only I could show you what you mean to me, Have you touch me or hold me ever so gently. All of those good times that we have had, Please do not leave me, please do not make me sad. You shall always remain as my sweetest friend, I hope you can trust me, I'll love you till the end. One night I said something that I shouldn't have said, I told somebody secrets that you trusted me with, and it makes me wish that I was dead. I shouldn't have been on those pills and online at the same time, Yet you forgave me anyway you heart still with mine. You may have a boyfriend of a month or two, I just want you to know I still love you. I still love you as a very good friend. Regardless of whether I’m yours in the end,
~ Aaron Graf
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Post by oleanderdragon on Oct 19, 2004 3:41:51 GMT -5
Would this be the friend you were telling me about hun??? Just wondering.. I've never seen this kind of poem from you.. she must have gotten you good.. Awesome writing darlin
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Post by strangeclouds on Oct 29, 2004 0:44:31 GMT -5
i like the ending
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Post by princesskitana on Oct 29, 2004 4:24:38 GMT -5
whoa that's intense. I've never seen this from you...that touch the heart dearly. You know i'll will recomend this. How can someone not? It is amasing. Almost the hidden you...I had tried to find...Anyway, excellent work on this piece.
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