Broken heart

[BrokenSoul]

/me This I wrote a while ago for a friend who seems to be always hurtings because things just don't go his way; I hope things get better... *


Each time that your heart is broken
All known reason is forsaken
Left with only a broken heart
As all of the world breaks apart

The sky darkens, the heavens shake
The land trembles, the mountains break
Continents freeze and oceans boil
As desecration taints every soil

The whole world is ruled by madness
Yet everything is still and lifeless
Music is but a chorus of screams
And nightmares have replaced all dreams

The sun radiates with darkness
The moon corrupted with vileness
The air is foul with resentment
And death has found his contentment

Amidst the chaos there is life
There is still hope amidst the strife
For salvation is never too late
There is still time to save your fate

Even if the world keeps on breaking
And your heart still keeps on aching
Even if pain is all you can feel
There are some wounds that time can heal

So never give up, never surrender
Within your heart you must remember
That fate will always tear you apart
But only you can mend your heart.


/me Sarah A Wilson

[strangeclouds]

i like this poem

[Aaron Graf]

This poem was probably the best written I've read in a while:

The sky darkens, the heavens shake
The land trembles, the mountains break
Continents freeze and oceans boil
As desecration taints every soil

The whole world is ruled by madness
Yet everything is still and lifeless
Music is but a chorus of screams
And nightmares have replaced all dreams

That was such a good use of metaphor [although in a sense sounds as if it is the world of today. People such as him are always lucky to have friends such as yourself, especially in this last part:

Even if the world keeps on breaking
And your heart still keeps on aching
Even if pain is all you can feel
There are some wounds that time can heal

So never give up, never surrender
Within your heart you must remember
That fate will always tear you apart
But only you can mend your heart.

Thank you so much for posting this.