Always Wanting You

[blacktears]

I hurt when you smile at me
I hate when you talk to her
I hate it when you don't trust me
I hurt when you like me
I hate it when you wont believe me
I hate it when you see me
I hate it when I hear you
I hurt when I feel you
I hate how I miss you
I hurt when I kiss him
I hate when you love her
I HATE WHEN YOU LOVE HER
I hurt when you want her
I hate how you use her
I hate how you use me
I hate how you stab him
I hurt when you save me
I hurt when you lable me
I hate how you lie to me
I hate when you find me
I hurt when I love you
I hate how I want you
I hurt when im his
I hate how this is
I hurt when I hate you
I hate how I love you
I hate how I want you
I hurt when I need you
I hate the way I see you
I want you to need me
and I just want you to see me.

[Aaron Graf]

Awwwwwww, this is a very sad write about love. I like that though, love hurts, like being stabbed by a machete. Anyways you did very good at expressing your views in this and I hope you continue to post more here at my site. WHoever this guy is I just hope he gives you some kind of respect you deserve.....you do deserve it.

[blacktears]

thanx,
its weird, i hate him cos he loves her but i love him cos i always have, or wanted to.
he is tom lol, its very sad, he doesnt no i love, or well, i dont realy believe in love, i think its just a like("you like some one") that gets stronger and stronger as you go on and on from different partners and become more experienced in this tense feeling, and grow to get stronger types of these feelings as you go on, and then the person that you with or the last person you have been with is just said to be the on you love becuase like your dead and you will never get to experience a greater feeling of likeness, which brings me to.. you know when your with someone(going out) and you think you will never not love them then you break up and a few months or weeks later your liek wtf. i guess i didnt love her, i think u just get caught up in the moment myself.

but any way.... the point is, ive like him almost a year. and he doesnt no:( and ive told him a few times, but he freaked out and stuff, and yeh:(

hey! mabe one day ill get ove rit and be thing wtf was i on about.
i juss wish,

he'd see me like that.
but if its ment to be, itll happen n less the gods are to lazy to get off thier butts and send them to farne st, but, im guessing its just not ment to be.


*big kisses* ally xox

[WilliamG]

lol, you know capitalization and grammar have no place in poetry, sometimes people leave things un-capitalized, or leave out some punctuation, or add capitlizations or punctuation where they shouldnt be to express certain moods, or emphasize certain points or pauses

--I'm willing to bet that the I that was uncapitalized was actually an accident, youre probably right, but just incase it wasn't you should ask first before correcting it

[princesskitana]

That's a very sweet poem. I could feel it perfectly cause it reminded me of Matt sometimes, reading it through..but that's beyond the point. Very sweet.

[strangeclouds]

what exactly is twisted blue? is that your pen name?

[strangeclouds]