oOFoxxyDeannaOo
Great Writer
I wish I was a fish so that I could drown.
Posts: 46
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Post by oOFoxxyDeannaOo on Dec 7, 2004 1:12:37 GMT -5
Blank pages turn before me as I think of you. Wind curls against my skin and no longer brings chills, Only the thought of you is my feeling..
I miss you.
Blank pages that hit the wind to brush against my hands politley, the way you would hold my hands to your finger tips... curled gently against my palm like the wind to my skin to bring me chills but I have chills no more cause I have not you. I pass the day with a sleep that isn't there. Eyes closed shut with a wakened mind to your thought.. you are only there in memory.
Blank pages like my mind are empty except for your thought. Sweet and kind, rude with no intentions.. that I seem to miss the most. The little things that take apart my soul. I miss everything about you. everything that is missed so much.
Blank pages that fill cause I love you so much.
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Post by Aaron Graf on Dec 8, 2004 4:26:38 GMT -5
That was actually very sad but I loved the way it was written, mostly because I could tell that came from the heart and it also had a very good metaphorical symbol of what was going on I loved this.....
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Post by strangeclouds on Dec 9, 2004 22:59:15 GMT -5
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Post by strangeclouds on Dec 11, 2004 0:10:24 GMT -5
rofl dont EVER say that again
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