Pain....

[Heavy Hearted]

I'm new here, and after reading some of the other poems I decided to write mine. Maybe in expressing what I feel, it'll help ease my pain......I'm not the best poet, but it helps me live....

The pain is more then I can bare,
buried deep within me.
I need someone to truly care
to look in my eyes and truly see.

See the pain I feel
Don't be fooled by my false smile.
I got the raw end of the deal,
I just want to forget, just for a while.

I want to live free,
unburdened by my pain..
I just want to be plain ol' me
I want to be the one to finally gain.

I can't express in words what I feel
I've sat in one spot, and let the tears cry
Thought maybe its a dream, not truly real.
but when I open my eyes and realise its true, I die.

I die a silent death every single day
yet no one truly does see
But I'm strong, I'll someday be okay
because the day will come, for me to fly high, and free.

I'll fly with the wings I've earned,and deserve
I'll lay at our heavenly father's feet, and heal
I'll get over what he did, the perve
maybe then I will truly start to feel..

~Heavy Hearted~

[LostInnocence]

you had good points but in my opinion it didn't flow very well....but overall you did a very good job and don't worry sweetie...believe it or not...it does get better (I'm living proof).

[Heavy Hearted]

Hi,
Thanx,for your comment.
I know that it isn't my best work, or my best expession of my feelings. It was one of my poems from when I was like 14....when I didn't know how to talk about it.
I'm getting better at expressing what I feel deep inside my soul...
And thanx for telling me that the pain gets better, cause some days I wonder if it ever will....
>>Heavy Hearted<<

[LostInnocence]

ur welcome...