the bullet is in all muslims hearts

[Yassmin]

the bullet is in his heart
a kid killed before his dreams could start
the bullet is in his head
Palestianians can't go to bed
the bullet is always there
of that evil are we aware??
is it fair?
to scream and save them who can dare?
children killed
walls are being build
what else???
who's responsibel for this?
whose fault is it?
for whose sake hate was built
who carries the guilt?
that kid,what pain his mother felt!!!
they are killing the future
oh sharon you are a buture
they stole the past
but remmber sharon nothing'll last
Allah is stronger
this wont last any longer

[Aaron Graf]

This poem was really good, but you didn't have to have Future and Buture......Buture is actually not a word, however Butcher would also fit, it wouldn't be an exact rhyme but close enough. There are a lot of grammatical errors in this such as typos and misspellings, but the poem and its message itself resonate with you and I like this because it just shows you exactly what's wrong, yet exactly what we ignore. Bravo.