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Post by GDelmarRatliff on Sept 4, 2004 21:15:09 GMT -5
Pictures Of Casualties
faces blank, the names all change. faceless, blank as death, the fixed smiles pile high enough to touch the face of GOD. in these squares of emotion sticks the lost souls of wonderers. their devotions admire.
medals rest, placed over coffins with finesse and a time. their green white and blue suits standardize with the relief of at ease. the lands give into themselves, clear seas break away, the dead dust settles—picturesque.
G. Delmar Ratliff
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Post by Aaron Graf on Sept 13, 2004 21:32:09 GMT -5
This has been put up in the newsletter...very good poem
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Post by unapologeticjedi on Sept 28, 2004 15:08:50 GMT -5
very nice, a little formal... i like your use of vocab though. last line wraps it up nicely.
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