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Post by razorrape on Feb 13, 2005 23:36:12 GMT -5
Past thoughts peer at me Through blinds Through cracks Through my eyes and skin
Sit in the bath See the red dance through the currents Looking like smoke As it seeps from wounds
Words escape me I can't form a coherent thought
The water is turning pink
Screaming under the water Bubbles shattering at the surface
Can you hear me?
Hold in the little breath I have left Suffocate and choke On water and surpressed screams
My mind has gone blank...
Visions of childhood and crosses return to me Adolescence--a blur of fights My short adulthood....
A vision of bloodied arms Legs Wrists
I open my eyes for the last time I'm staring down at myself
The last air pocket escapes my lips It bursts Specks of bloody bath water hit the white tiles
You open the door I'm gone You scream and cry It's not your fault, it's mine
Pull the plug Let the bloody water down the drain I've left a ring for you It's red and lines the tub
I am the dirty bath water Hear the final drops of me course down the pipes That is my goodbye to you
Don't pick me up and hold me I don't want to stain your clothes Like I've stained your heart Your life
Call the coroner Have my funeral I'll be there with you But you won't see me
That's the best thing
Bloody tears fall down But turn clear before they tap your skull You think it rain But its just the ignorant tears of a person you use to know
Grief is wasted on me....
Don't cry
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Heavy Hearted
Excellent Writer
My soul is dead....but I wish it me instead...
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Post by Heavy Hearted on Feb 13, 2005 23:44:22 GMT -5
I don't know what to say besides I like it..... (to tired to think, sorry)
>>Heavy Hearted<<
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KickMe
Amatuer
Kick Me, Becuase I'm Stupid Enough to Keep Living
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Post by KickMe on Mar 8, 2005 16:19:27 GMT -5
wow, i really really like this. you did an excellant job here, and i could really see what was happening in my mind. *points at forehead where my mind's eye is located* lol. anywayz, yeah, good job, you have an incredible talent. it was honest and full of emotion.
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